Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Media
follow
the
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celebrities
everywhere to capture their every moment. Being a
celebrity
,
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has its own pros and cons.
However
,
paparrazi
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paparazzi
should let them live their
life
privately for certain
ocassions
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occasions
like personal moments because they are human
being
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beings
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too. Nowadays,
media
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has the only goal to cover the
celebrity
's
life
to sell their story. Whether
its
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a
news
channel or
the
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social
media
platforms,
celebrities
are everywhere. From their routine
life
to personal
matter
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matters
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nothing is hidden from the public. As soon as they stepped out of their house
media
starts to cover them and published where did they go or who are they meeting and
sometime
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hyped about their
news
.
For example
, if one male actor is seen with another female actress,
news
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the news
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will go like are they dating? or just
friend
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friends
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?
However
, some
celebrities
, call the
media
deliberately about their whereabouts to stay in the
news
. It is indeed good to be in
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lime light
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limelight
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for their career but being a human they need their moment without being captured
in
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camera. Being a famous
celebrity
, people are curious about their
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lifestyle
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life style
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lifestyle
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, albeit
media
sometimes go beyond that. They have no restrictions line and many times
media
behave
insensitive
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towrds
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towards
them. When a family member of a
celebrity
dies, they cover and broadcast the
news
is okay but they do not let them grieve personally is not okay at all. It's
media's
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job but ruining someone's personal
life
is not the correct way to do one's job.
For instance
,
media
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the media
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was literally chasing
the
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princess Diana and how horrible the incident turned out. Before being a public figure they are human and they have feelings too which should be taken care of. In conclusion,
paparazzi
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the paparazzi
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should always have that fine line between their approach to give the
celebrities
a space and privacy to live their
life
. Being a public figure they do not even ab
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