Should a city try to preserve its old, historic buildings or destroy them and replace them with modern buildings? Give your opinion.

There are ample historical monuments in each and every part of
world
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. Some people are of opinion that these
buildings
can be replaced by new ones that are
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inline
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with today's architectural advancement but others contrast
this
notion.
However
, I am in complete harmony with the
though
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that historic structures should be preserved because they are symbols of one's history coupled with tourist attractions and these could
also
act as inspiration for
young
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generation.
Firstly
, every society has
certain
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number of old
buildings
which reflects its rich heritage. . Not only, they are being identified as
tourist
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a tourist
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place, but
government
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is
also
earning healthy revenue from
the
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tourism which indirectly affects the economy of
country
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the country
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in
positive
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manner. For an instance,
Taj
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Mahal in India is famous historical
buildings
where tourists visit and appraise its architect and richness of culture which existed
older
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times.
Moreover
,
local
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government is
also
earning regularly through
ticket
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system for visitors.
Hence
, these
buildings
from
olden
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days describe the society's heritage culture and
also
act
has
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revenue-generation
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a revenue-generation
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medium for local government.
Secondly
, these
buildings
built many years back give motivation to
young
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the young
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generation and some of them even act as
symbol
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a symbol
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of fundamental virtues like love, peace and patriotism which one should acquire. For
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example
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Jallianwala Bagh is
Amristsar
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Amritsar
city of India is
symbol
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a symbol
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of patriotism which has always been always the source of motivation for
the
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young people.
Therefore
, these historical
buildings
may not
meant
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to replace or dismantled. To conclude, It can be asserted that no modern
buildings
can replace the old historical monuments as they are the live examples
cultures
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of society and
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as
medium
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a medium
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of inspiration for youth.
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