Some countries achieve international success by building specialized facilities to train top athletes instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think it is a positive or negative development？

Each country

choses

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chooses

chose

each

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own

way

to be

winner

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the winner

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of different

type

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types

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of games,

such

as regional, or world games. And the Olympic Game is the top of wish where nations would like to attend.

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, to get

gold

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as

it

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possible, silver and bronze

also

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not so

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. There

are

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two main

direction

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to reach

that achievements

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. We will try to look

each

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of them and make conclusion at the end of

this

passage. On the one hand, support and make all facilities for the best athletes

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more reasonable due to they

are

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need

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less

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resources and time. Top

sportsmen

look for their profession more seriously, and no need

motivating

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factors.

Sport

it’s

their all and reason for life. In

this

case

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chances to get good results

higher

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. Nations like the USA, UK and other capitalistic countries chose

this

way

of developing their

sport

in population.

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is

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way

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shows good result in common.

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, it is

big

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question, where former countries take top athletes if not provide

such

facilities for the wide range of citizens. Because

main

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supplier of

sportsmen

for the competitions is own population. And in

this

case

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building

sport

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sports

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infrastructure for each

citizen

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it’s look

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right

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way

of

sport

development.

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is in itself

motivating

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factor for

sportsmen

because more and more will be interesting in

sport

. But

this

is take

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more financial subsidizing to

sport

from the government, and

this

is main lack of

this

way

of

sport

development.

However

,

it’s

effect indirect to the government development, due to chances that all nation will be healthier, and will bring more benefits. In conclusion, we discuss both sides of

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. Each position has

own

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benefits and

lack

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. So spend money to top athletes and increase chances for best result or finance

wide

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range of people and select best

sportsmen

depend

of

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county political view.