Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The authorities from many countries argue that economic advancement is their most crucial goal , while other people think that another kind of improvement is
also
important for a nation . In my opinion , other progress is also
playing a vital role for a nation .
To start with that why might government reckon that economic development is more important . First
and foremost , it provides a good salary and services to the citizens . To illustrate , if there is good progress of economy then
the individual can be able to get a good price for their work or job , even somewhere it also
generates the employment for the public . Secondly
, the name of the country is internationally known . For instance
, the rate of exporting the goods will increase and there is a decrease in the importing of goods due to the progress in the economy and an increase in manufacturing of the goods .
Nevertheless
, improvement in the education system is also
important for a country . Even though there are many people who do not know how to read or write , they are not able to work in a good company or anywhere else . Although
nowadays everything is based on technology , there is a big need to be educated to do the job or for any kind of employment . Adding to this
, there should be an improvement in the health facilities . For example
, the fitness facilities are improved then
the life expectancy , working efficiency and many more things are coming in front of the country . As "health is the wealth" .
In conclusion , economic development can lead to service , but education and well-being is
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