You will move to a new city for work. You know some people who live there. Write a letter to someone you know who lives there. In your letter ask them for help in finding accommodation tell them where you would like to live tell them the type of place you are looking for

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Dear Jessica, Hope you and your family are doing well. I have some exciting news to share with you and seek your help regarding the same. I will be moving to New York

month and would like to ask for your help in finding accommodation in the same city. I wouldn’t want to impose you though, but I would really appreciate it if you could find a place closer to your residence as it would be easy for me to travel to work as well as be closer.

However

, I do know how expensive New York can be in terms of the lease. So, I am looking for a single room and it should be enough for me as I’m not bringing much stuff. I don't find the floor it is situated on.

Although

, I would be grateful if you could find a place closer to a subway as it would be convenient. Let me know if you know of any available options or put me in touch with an agency, it would be fantastic. Looking forward to seeing you soon. Warm wishes, Farhana Jabeen

Submitted by jabeenfarhana9 on Sun Nov 07 2021

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7 paragraphs

186 words

9.00

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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Topic Vocabulary:

relocating, accommodation, housing
assistance, recommendations, suburbs
neighborhood, proximity, amenities, vibrant
studio, apartment, shared house, unfurnished
budget, preferences, survey, listings
grateful, anticipate, guidance, invaluable

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