You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you fing it very difficult to work. write a letter to the accomodation officer at the college. in this letter: . describe the situation . explain your problems and why it is difficult to work . say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

Dear Mr Johnson, I am writing

this

letter to draw your attention to the issues that I am facing while sharing a

room

with another student

this

accommodation is provided by the college. My name is Regina and I am an engineering final year student, Since she came I have been feeling inconvenient to stay with her. She is a new roommate by

this

month. I have two problems that I would like to bring to your attention.

Firstly

, she plays music very loudly in

evenings

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,

this

can affect

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my academic performance and my concentration may be lost when I will prefer in

mmy

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my

final exam.

Secondly

, she arranges a party often and she invites a lot of her friends to our

room

. I told

many

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times to my

troubleness

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troubles

about her activities, even though, she still continues. I want to shift my

room

from her and I would like to have a single

room

without roommates and I can accept same

my

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course roommate,

thus

, I can give more concentration about my studies and assignments work too. I would be grateful if you would arrange a quiet

room

for me. I look forward to receiving your response as soon as possible. Thank you. Your's sincerely, Regina.