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You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you fing it very difficult to work. write a letter to the accomodation officer at the college. in this letter: . describe the situation . explain your problems and why it is difficult to work . say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

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Dear Mr Johnson, I am writing
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 letter to draw your attention to the issues that I am facing while sharing a
room
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 with another student
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 accommodation is provided by the college. My name is Regina and I am an engineering final year student, Since she came I have been feeling inconvenient to stay with her. She is a new roommate by
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 month. I have two problems that I would like to bring to your attention.
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, she plays music very loudly in
evenings
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,
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 can affect
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my academic performance and my concentration may be lost when I will prefer in
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my
 final exam.
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, she arranges a party often and she invites a lot of her friends to our
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. I told
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 times to my
troubleness
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troubles
 about her activities, even though, she still continues. I want to shift my
room
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 from her and I would like to have a single
room
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 without roommates and I can accept same
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 course roommate,
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, I can give more concentration about my studies and assignments work too. I would be grateful if you would arrange a quiet
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 for me. I look forward to receiving your response as soon as possible. Thank you. Your's sincerely, Regina.
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