What are the advantages and disadvantages of leaving your country to live or study abroad?
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who immigrate to other countries
to achieve their study goals or get better jobs nowadays. human being migration history come backs
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Successfulness is one of the important man-kind desires which encourages people
to make difficult decisions in their lives and overcome many hardships. Thanks to progressive, fast development occurrence in our new world
, immigration is accepted by many communities, therefor
it is considered Correct your spelling
therefore
as
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a
multilateral
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a multilateral
the multilateral
issue
which many countries
create and develop policies for immigrants continuously. According to incredible speed in science development. It is necessary to
some bodies to study in the universities that are not in their own Change preposition
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countries
so they can level up their knowledge and then
make new opportunities to live better since their real potentials is
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world
peace through creating new communities which is
combined of many nations.
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Nevertheless
, there are some disadvantages for people
to leave their country, for
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this
may have negative effects on the person’s mental’s
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on the other hand
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this
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could be addressed through well-planned preparation training programs, so people
can be adopted
to new situations.
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adapted
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considered
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However
, I believe it is very beneficial for developing the world
in a better way and also
give people
fair opportunities from all around the world
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