What are the advantages and disadvantages of leaving your country to live or study abroad?

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who immigrate to other

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to achieve their study goals or get better jobs nowadays. human being migration history

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to the beginning of the very elementary civilization

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, when colonies had always

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the earth to reach the better place In

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will be discussed. Successfulness is one of the important man-kind desires which encourages

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to make difficult decisions in their lives and overcome many hardships. Thanks to progressive, fast development occurrence in our new

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, immigration is accepted by many communities,

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which many

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create and develop policies for immigrants continuously. According to incredible speed in science development. It is necessary

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some bodies to study in the universities that are not in their own

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so they can level up their knowledge and

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make new opportunities to live better since their real potentials

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used in the appropriate way. There is more aspect on

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get familiar with other cultures and

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peace through creating new communities which

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combined of many nations.

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, there are some disadvantages for

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to leave their country,

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they have to be separate from their family and

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may have negative effects on the person’s

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health which is critical in some cases since they feel less-support.

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, there are significant differences among the nation’s cultures,

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some

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may not be accepted in some

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others even appreciated. In my

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could be addressed through well-planned preparation training programs, so

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can be

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to new situations.

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immigration has many aspects that

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by every one person to obtain assurance that they can deal with new circumstances.

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, I believe it is very beneficial for developing the

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in a better way and

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give

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fair opportunities from all around the

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to show them up.