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The economic growth in developing and developed countries is making people richer. However, the research indicates that people in the developing countries is happier than people in developed countries. What is your opinion on this

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There is no doubt that economic advancement is making
people
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 wealthier in developed and developing
countries
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.
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, the standard of life has improved a
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last
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 decade and the population living in developed
nations
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 are much happier than in
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underdeveloped
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under developed
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nations
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. In
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 we will try to intend some of the reasons for the
above mentioned
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 argument. It is much obvious that the population living in most advanced
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 are enjoying much better
facilities
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 from their governments
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 as better infrastructure, free health care
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, free education for their kids and many more.
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 in developed
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countries
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 there is
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 less unemployment rate and the
people
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 are not too much worried about the jobs and the future of their kids.
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 to the above, the advanced
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 have
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 strong economy and their currency value is much higher than the
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underdeveloped
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under developed
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nations
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, the US dollar is the strongest currency in the world and
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 the reason
people
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 of America are able to visit many different
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 and have a very higher buying power.
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, in advanced
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 and because of their well economic structure, it is very easy to invest and proceed
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 career as a business person since the policy related to the chamber of commerce are very flexible and in
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 of investing and trading.
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, there are lots of problems faced by the
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 of
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under developed
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countries
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 which is the reason in many cases the
people
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 are not happier. Some of the common issues faced by these
people
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 are poor government
facilities
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, poverty, lack of resources for personal development.
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 these
nations
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also
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 have
very
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low quality
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 infrastructure. poor health care
facilities
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 and
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low grade
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 public education system. To summarize,
people
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 in developed
nations
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 enjoy much high quality of life and other
facilities
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 from the government
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 the reason which
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 them happier than
people
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 living in developing
countries
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • economic growth
  • developing countries
  • developed countries
  • wealth
  • happiness
  • basic needs
  • sense of community
  • family ties
  • stress
  • pressure
  • social status
  • materialism
  • consumerism
  • cultural values
  • social relationships
  • lifestyle choices
  • dissatisfaction
  • perpetual pursuit
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