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Today I do not have a great mood to study, I am sick indeed. There will be two days left and I will take a sit for the
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 so that I can know exactly where is my weakness needs to improve. I have a headache
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 and toothache. Probably I worried too much about the exam because it will decide my career future. My mother advised me not to be stressed about things that I can not change the situation. To be honest, studying is my strength thanks to my habit of persistent practice on anything that I want to achieve. I used to obtain a privileged award from Vietnam Education Ministry back to 2011 In conclusion , I think that I should overcome
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, my husband will worry about me. Well, I think I should know where is my limit, which I understand better than anyone else, including my family.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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