Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve the growing traffic and pollution problems.
Nowadays, a many possible to lead
number
of societies are declining their Change to a plural noun
numbers
life
quality. In this
essay, I will explain the reasons why it is occurred
and suggest possible solutions to alleviate Change to the active voice
occurs
has occurred
this
issues.
Correct determiner usage
these
To begin
with, it is evident that individuals have sufficient productions in daily life
. For example
, citizens throw away items which
are not old or used when they bore to utilize them. Correct pronoun usage
that
On the other hand
, when people
consider and learn about recent environmental problems, they do not do that kind of actions
. Fix the agreement mistake
action
In particular
, sea pollution is one of the issues in recent. This
is because people
throw away plastic supplement
. If persons know about it, they must stop and reconsider their Fix the agreement mistake
supplements
behaviors
. Change the spelling
behaviours
Hence
, large
number of Change the article
a large
the large
people
absorb the knowledge about latest
Correct article usage
the latest
informations
which can show possible Change the wording
information
pieces of information
solution
for civilians.
Fix the agreement mistake
solutions
Moreover
, there is no doubt that technology development might lead these
problems. Change preposition
to these
This
means that people
easy to use a lot of materials comfortably, people
are not likely to do themselves
. Correct pronoun usage
it themselves
For instance
, in the factory, the machines are working instead
of Add an article
a human
human
. It can produce their Fix the agreement mistake
humans
production
cheaper and more improve their quantity. Replace the word
products
In contrast
, people
should less rely on the
technology. They originally developed their idea and invention. Correct article usage
apply
In addition
, human
population will be increasing in the future. As for Add an article
the human
this
, we ought to bring back the handmade method such
as traditional items. As the result, they should take apart the developed life
and make materials by hand.
To sum up, it has two causes to have enough object
and invention. Fix the agreement mistake
objects
However
, itAdd a missing verb
is
Change preposition
to the
the
low quality of Correct article usage
a
life
. They should avoid this
matter to learn our
planet and be independent Change preposition
about our
from
comfortable items.Change the preposition
of
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