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Some people think parents should not encourage to do a part time job to what extend do you agree or disagree with this view.

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People have a viewpoint that in today's world folks shouldn't allow their children to work as temporary employees of any Company as it can affect the sanctity of working after completion of a degree. They feel that there would be no sense of belonging within the family. In my opinion, I completely disagree with the statement as it is quite necessary to encourage the current generation to work and earn at an early age.
Firstly
, I would like to opine that encouragement to the younger clads by their own family to work part-time, makes them self-independent, patient as well as reliable. They tend to be more hard-working to fulfil their needs and it
also
 brings in a sense of stability in their life.
Additionally
, it disseminates peace of mind and happiness simultaneously.
For instance
, if a guy wants to donate some clothes to orphans on his birthday with his own hard-earned money, he would be on the top of the world if it is successfully achieved.
However
, it's
also
 important to be grounded and not turn into an egoistic maniac which leads to problems in future endeavours. Having said that, parents play a very important role in their progress and seeing their kids achieve and attain success at
such
 a young age would make them proud. But it is
also
 necessary that they should not take the wrong path towards success. In conclusion, working part-time is not an offence but an aim to achieve and be competitive. It's a learning stage of life and we should make full use of it to be happy internally as well as externally.
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