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You will move to a new city for work. You know some people who live there. Write a letter to someone you know who lives there. In your letter ask them for help in finding accommodation tell them where you would like to live tell them the type of place you are looking for Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Miss Anna, I hope you are doing amazing. Hope
this
 letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am pleased to tell you that I got a job offer in a hospital in your city and seeking your kind assistance in searching for a suitable flat. I would like to tell you that I need your help in finding comfortable and convenient accommodation for me. It has been so long for you to live there so you are well aware of that area. My main preference of location is VIP road zirakpur. As I have searched it on Google, it has amazing luxuries flats.
Additionally
, it is a five-minute distance from my workplace. Prices are
also
 moderate and it will not burn a hole in my pocket. So it is going to be a win and win situation for me. Mainly, I would like to rent a single bedroom apartment set with an attached bathroom It would be amazing if it has a lawn or kitchen garden.Most importantly , it should be in the vicinity of my office Your assistance in
this
 matter would be highly appreciated. Hope to see you soon Yours Sincerely, Manvir Kaur
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • relocating, accommodation, housing
  • assistance, recommendations, suburbs
  • neighborhood, proximity, amenities, vibrant
  • studio, apartment, shared house, unfurnished
  • budget, preferences, survey, listings
  • grateful, anticipate, guidance, invaluable
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