You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter correct the information in the article. explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

Dear Sir or Madam, I write in reference to the recent article about the town Chander Nagar in your magazine describing some of the interesting places to visit. The article covered the information about all the areas except that there were a few corrections in the
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that was printed. I am highlighting a few corrections that would make the
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more precise. The
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portrayed that my town has only one bus terminus whereas it has two.
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, the address of the art gallery was specified to be 1st street but it is supposed to be 5th street. Yet another correction is that the direction of the temple road is along the Main road and not opposite to the Main road. I would be most grateful if you provide appropriate directions so that the tourists are not misguided. As your magazine is the face of Indian tourism, I believe that the information ought to be more accurate. I would appreciate it if you could republish the article with the corrected
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. Thank you. Yours faithfully, Subashree Krishnan.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Rectify
  • Misrepresentation
  • Tourism
  • Editor
  • Credibility
  • Accuracy
  • Local heritage
  • Fact-checking
  • Repercussions
  • Counteractive measures
  • Publishing ethics
  • Clarification
  • Factual error
  • Misconception
  • Authenticity
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