There are different customs in different countries related to how people eat, dress, and so on. Some think that people visiting a country should behave according to customs of the country they visit. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that every
country
has its own customs related to food, clothing, and so forth. It is believed by some people that various
cultures
of a nation should be considered while visiting that
country
. I tend to agree with
this
idea and I will discuss my opinion in the essay below. Customs of a particular nation should be noticed by
visitors
of the target
country
, as long as the tourists enjoy their trips and do not put a lot of pressure on themselves to behave
accordingly
. As you know, people varied a lot in terms of their
cultures
and customs,
as a result
, it may be so challenging for a population from different nations to behave in the same way. To illustrate, Iranian might find it hard to eat food with needles which the Chinese use
instead
of spoons and folks.
On the other hand
, behaving according to the
cultures
of a
country
gives
visitors
a chance to become familiar with that nation as soon as possible. Take
for example
food, it can be so interesting to try different cuisines of a particular
country
.
Moreover
,
visitors
can find themselves as a part of society very soon. By behaving
accordingly
, they can find more friends and
also
can strengthen their relationships. In conclusion, I believe that socializing with foreign people according to their
cultures
help
visitors
to make better relationships and become aware of different
cultures
;
however
,
this
is as long as the tourists enjoy their visits.
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