You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter explain why you would like the job give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter with reference to your advertisement in the magazine for a

job

for six months which includes taking care of your child and living at your place. I believe that I could be the best caregiver for your child. My name is Farhana Jabeen and I am an exchange student pursuing my master’s degree in nutrition in Australia and was looking for new accommodation and

job

. I would like to provide a few details about me which would suggest that I would be a suitable candidate for

this

role. I was previously employed in a daycare facility and my primary

job

was to take care of children around the age of 4-6.

In addition

this

, I have immense knowledge in terms of nutrients required for a child's growth.

Although

I was unable to continue my previous employment as it was quite far from my university, I have been seeking a similar

job

for quite some time and was delighted that

this

place is closer to my campus. My classes are scheduled three times a week, I have a lot of free time that I spend on gardening.

Additionally

, I would love to explore

this

beautiful country and learn more about the people's lifestyle during the

few months here in Australia. Thank you for taking the time to read my letter. Please feel free to contact me if you need

further

details and recommendations. Yours faithfully, Farhana Jabeen

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

247 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Childcare, Nurturing, Patience, Creativity, Early childhood development
Babysitting, Au pair, Engaging, Responsible, Enthusiastic
Safety, Trustworthy, Adaptability, Proactive, Cultural exchange
Activities, Educational games, Language skills, Exploring
Volunteering, Community involvement, Australian culture
Flexibility, Personal traits, Schedule, Enrichment

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