You have just read am article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter Correct the information in the article. Explain why is it important for the magazine to give correct information. Suggest what magazine should do about this situation

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to draw your attention to the article that was released in your travel magazine
this
week about Hyderabad which is incorrect. The article stated that
this
town does not have restaurants that offer international food and the main focus is local food.
However
, it is completely untrue as
this
town is considered as one of the best in terms of providing a variety of cuisines. It is crucial for a travel magazine to verify the data before making it public as
this
gives false information to the entire world and impacts tourism. While it might appear like a small issue considering the size of the piece but it has to be addressed and rectified as
this
magazine is read by people all over the world. I would really appreciate it if you could release an updated piece mentioning the correct details and apologizing to the public for providing false knowledge. I really hope that you will be able to resolve
this
situation at the earliest to everyone’ satisfaction. Yours faithfully, Farhana Jabeen
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Rectify
  • Misrepresentation
  • Tourism
  • Editor
  • Credibility
  • Accuracy
  • Local heritage
  • Fact-checking
  • Repercussions
  • Counteractive measures
  • Publishing ethics
  • Clarification
  • Factual error
  • Misconception
  • Authenticity
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