You have just read am article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter Correct the information in the article. Explain why is it important for the magazine to give correct information. Suggest what magazine should do about this situation

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to draw your attention to the article that was released in your travel magazine

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week about Hyderabad which is incorrect. The article stated that

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town does not have restaurants that offer international food and the main focus is local food.

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, it is completely untrue as

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town is considered as one of the best in terms of providing a variety of cuisines. It is crucial for a travel magazine to verify the data before making it public as

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gives false information to the entire world and impacts tourism. While it might appear like a small issue considering the size of the piece but it has to be addressed and rectified as

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magazine is read by people all over the world. I would really appreciate it if you could release an updated piece mentioning the correct details and apologizing to the public for providing false knowledge. I really hope that you will be able to resolve

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situation at the earliest to everyone’ satisfaction. Yours faithfully, Farhana Jabeen

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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6 paragraphs

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Topic Vocabulary:

Rectify
Misrepresentation
Tourism
Editor
Credibility
Accuracy
Local heritage
Fact-checking
Repercussions
Counteractive measures
Publishing ethics
Clarification
Factual error
Misconception
Authenticity

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