It is commonly believed that nowadays main factors that affect a child's development are media, pop culture and friends. A different point of view is that family plays the most significant role. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people claim that external factors

such

as media, pop culture and friends could influence more the development of the child, while others think that family has

this

crucial role to evolve

kids

.

This

essay will discuss both sides of view and give my opinion on how these external models are becoming more frequent in the way the children have been raised. The

first

reason why family are losing their influence on their own child is that the

parents

are too busy working. Due to the fact that people have worked more hours to have a minimum quality of

life

, they do not have enough

time

to spend with their children, and ,

usually

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they are exhausted after work to play with their

kids

.

For example

, a single mother who needs to work overtime, might not have the availability to teach values for their son.

Therefore

,

parents

like

this

do not have alternatives rather than leading their sons in front of a device while they are working.

On the other hand

, family is the

first

social group that child will live together, and

kids

are like sponges in

this

time

of

life

.

For instance

, all the adult's behaviours will be imitated by the

kids

, no matter what the

parents

say, the kid always will replicate behaviours. So in

this

case, the family will influence the

kids

’ development more than other external influences.

However

,

this

situation is less common, since the

parents

have less

time

to spend with their

kids

.

Therefore

, the media and friends will forge the child’ character more than the family. To conclude, it can be argued that family has an essential role in how their

kids

evolve,

however

people are working more and more to afford a comfortable

life

, and

as a result

,

kids

have less

time

with their

parents

to

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and be influenced by them.

In contrast

, media that do not have a content filter is becoming more present in the

kids

’

life

without the supervision of an adult.