It is commonly believed that nowadays main factors that affect a child's development are media, pop culture and friends. A different point of view is that family plays the most significant role. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people claim that external factors

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as media, pop culture and friends could influence more the development of the child, while others think that family has

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crucial role to evolve

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essay will discuss both sides of view and give my opinion on how these external models are becoming more frequent in the way the children have been raised. The

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reason why family are losing their influence on their own child is that the

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are too busy working. Due to the fact that people have worked more hours to have a minimum quality of

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, they do not have enough

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to spend with their children, and ,

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they are exhausted after work to play with their

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, a single mother who needs to work overtime, might not have the availability to teach values for their son.

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,

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like

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do not have alternatives rather than leading their sons in front of a device while they are working.

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, family is the

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social group that child will live together, and

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are like sponges in

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time

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of

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, all the adult's behaviours will be imitated by the

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, no matter what the

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say, the kid always will replicate behaviours. So in

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case, the family will influence the

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’ development more than other external influences.

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,

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situation is less common, since the

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have less

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to spend with their

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, the media and friends will forge the child’ character more than the family. To conclude, it can be argued that family has an essential role in how their

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evolve,

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people are working more and more to afford a comfortable

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, and

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,

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have less

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with their

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to

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and be influenced by them.

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, media that do not have a content filter is becoming more present in the

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’

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without the supervision of an adult.