Modern technology is now very common in most workplaces. how do you think this had changed the way we work? Do you think there are disadvantages to relying too much on technology?

Advance technology is now very commonly seen in

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most

work

environments. The essay argues that there are some changes that are implemented in the

workplace

, it has more than disadvantages there are numerous advantages. In the below paragraph, we will state the changes and the advantages due to the rise of technology.

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, Technology has been changing numerously in the past two decades, from small data collection to the world wide web. The workspace has been advanced in

this

modern times.The

first

invention was communication through telecommunication but, now it is advanced by mails, which helps the employees in their

work

.

Moreover

, the invention of automated search machines as well as conference rooms.

This

helps them

work

go easier and rapidly fast.

In addition

to ,

this

the

workplace

has quite interesting equipment

that is

considered useful in that location.

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, in my office we find so much advanced automation has been implemented, the main invention was the robot, we have three robots in our office, so they help us to complete our

work

more efficiently and als0o with fewer mistakes not just like a human.

Secondly

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tend to feel that, more machinery is harmful. Because they are so many reasons that make the

workplace

were peaceful and

also

stress-free. The main reason is the rapid growth of info, which has developed the wealth and

also

the stability of the job profile. Through

this

community can do the job easily and they can have maximum share of knowledge. On top of

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, data cannot be encrypted in any case, through

this

progress people can keep their info safe. To cite an example, In our construction business for drawing the structure of the building was very difficult in the past decades, it would take a lot of time to do the structure, but now we have AutoCAD software in our computers , so the sketch can be easily drawn,

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this

mechanism helped the nation in their

workplace

In the conclusion, they are lots of points that the company has been changed nowadays

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because it is easy to

work

in

this

automated environment.

However

,

this

advancement of tech did not have more disadvantages, it has lots of advantages like making the

work

efficiently with the mechanism and robots