Modern technology is now very common in most workplaces. how do you think this had changed the way we work? Do you think there are disadvantages to relying too much on technology?

Advance technology is now very commonly seen in

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environments. The essay argues that there are some changes that are implemented in the

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, it has more than disadvantages there are numerous advantages. In the below paragraph, we will state the changes and the advantages due to the rise of technology.

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, Technology has been changing numerously in the past two decades, from small data collection to the world wide web. The workspace has been advanced in

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modern times.The

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invention was communication through telecommunication but, now it is advanced by mails, which helps the employees in their

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.

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, the invention of automated search machines as well as conference rooms.

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helps them

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go easier and rapidly fast.

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to ,

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the

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has quite interesting equipment

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considered useful in that location.

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, in my office we find so much advanced automation has been implemented, the main invention was the robot, we have three robots in our office, so they help us to complete our

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more efficiently and als0o with fewer mistakes not just like a human.

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tend to feel that, more machinery is harmful. Because they are so many reasons that make the

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were peaceful and

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stress-free. The main reason is the rapid growth of info, which has developed the wealth and

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the stability of the job profile. Through

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community can do the job easily and they can have maximum share of knowledge. On top of

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, data cannot be encrypted in any case, through

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progress people can keep their info safe. To cite an example, In our construction business for drawing the structure of the building was very difficult in the past decades, it would take a lot of time to do the structure, but now we have AutoCAD software in our computers , so the sketch can be easily drawn,

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mechanism helped the nation in their

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In the conclusion, they are lots of points that the company has been changed nowadays

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because it is easy to

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in

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automated environment.

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advancement of tech did not have more disadvantages, it has lots of advantages like making the

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efficiently with the mechanism and robots