In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e books rather than paper books. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

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world we can see that most of them are favour in

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because there is no

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,one ebook reader can hold thousands of

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are harder to read in sunlight. the glare of the sun makes a screen hard to read. in conclusion,

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while in the future world will miss

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my opinion advantages totally overweigh disadvantages.

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In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e books rather than paper books. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

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Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day. Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones.

Some people think that education should be free for all. Discuss both views and give your opinion

There is too much noise in the public places of cities. What is the caused and how government and people in that areas can solves the problem.

In some countries, secondary schools provide students with an opportunity to learn skills such as cooking, basic repairs, drawing and woodwork. What are the advantages and disadvantages of teaching such non-academic classes in school?

Million of dollars are spent on space research every year. Some people argue that the money should be spent on improving living standards on Earth. Do you agree or disagree?