In the modern world, it is possible to shop, work and communicate with people via the Internet and live without ant face-to- face contact with others. Is this a positive or negative development in your opinion?

Using the

Internet

to serve daily life purposes has enjoyed increasing popularity in recent years. From my perspective, it has both advantageous and detrimental sides in equal measure. Switching from traditional tools to the

Internet

can be deemed disadvantageous for some reasons. The most obvious drawback is forming a sedentary lifestyle, which

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on their health and family. Vietnam, where the majority of young people use mainly the

Internet

to study and work that

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spend time for outside activities to improve their physical fitness or family relationship to bond with them, can be seen as an object lesson. Another pitfall is that people would

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on the

Internet

and easily get sophisticated scams

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because

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of some means of media is

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that crimes take advantage trust of humans and those who

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about how to

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the

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.

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can lead to

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number of criminal crimes. Despite these aforementioned disadvantages, some significant advantages of using the

Internet

do exist. The most prominent benefit is that

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is useful and convenient.

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, those who have shopping demands can easily

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for something and filter quality products from the large numbers of

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online all around the world via

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eCommerce

e-commerce

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platform

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.

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can lead to being time-saving

instead

of being time-consuming to go to the traditional stores. Another compelling point is that humans can gain

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massive knowledge, make friends with foreigners or understand about culture and history of some nations around the world.

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is because people need to integrate to increase

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to others in the global period. In conclusion, my firm conviction is that using the

Internet

is detrimental for its sedentary lifestyle and

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criminal crimes, but it can be very convenient and

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useful knowledge as well.