It is better to live in one town or city all your life.

The
city
or town where
people
live
have
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a huge impact on their
life
quality. While some have the opinion that changing the living
city
time
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from time
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to time is a great idea, I believe that having a single
city
for all the
life
is the best approach. I will elaborate on my viewpoint in the following essay.
First
and foremost, the procedure of changing
house
is an expensive one, even when it takes place in the same
city
, now consider how much it will cost to change
house
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the house
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from one
city
to another. To be more precise,
beside
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besides
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the price of the new
house
, it consists of two major costs: Finding the appropriate
house
, usually with the help of real-states, and bringing everything from
old
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the old
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house
to the
new
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onenew
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. It is a common
believe
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belief
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that
real-states
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real states
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are not caring
people
at all,
instead
, the only thing they care
the
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about the
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most is money. They see their
costumers
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customers
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like a suitcase full of cash. Some
people
prefer to avoid getting help from them, but I think it
worth
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to use
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using
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them. In
this
way, you are sure that you will reach
to
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your desired
house
. Another cost is
the
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transportation. Because of the
raising
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rising
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price of
the
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fuel and
also
labor
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labour
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, they charge
people
more than before. As travelling between cities is a long journey, there is no need to say that they will charge more
dependent
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depending
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on the distance between two houses.
That is
why I believe it is better to stay in
a
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the
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same
city
, or even in
a
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the
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same
house
for
the
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your
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whole
life
. Another equally important reason is that
people
find jobs and
friends
in their own
city
. If they change their
city
occasionally,
then
they have to
looking
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look
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for
job
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a job
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again and
also
making
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make
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new
friends
, which none of them is an easy thing to do.
For instance
, years ago I decided to live in a new
city
to pursue my career,
then
I left my family and
friends
in my home town assuming that I can find new
friends
like them. I had tried very hard but I never
have
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had
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the same relationship with my new
friends
in the new
city
. By the
way
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,way
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I had a job offer and I did not suffer from searching for jobs.
This
example illustrates that it is better to stick with your old
friends
which are living in your
city
. In conclusion, with all
this
taken into account, I assert that the best option is to live in one
city
during the whole
life
.
This
is because changing
house
and
consequently
city
is a very expensive procedure, and
also
people
will lose their connection with their
friends
and family.
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