You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, ⦁ describe what you enjoyed about the course ⦁ say how much cooking you've done since the course ⦁ suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer
Dear Sir or Madam,
I, Jenny Chan, have just finished a 14-day cookery
course
for beginner
from Dusit College. I am writing to give you Fix the agreement mistake
beginners
feedbacks
about Correct your spelling
feedback
this
course
.
First
of all, I would like to inform you what I liked about this
course
. The insturctors
were very nice and friendly. I enjoyed the way they gave me the recipe Correct your spelling
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of
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for
Moreover
, all dishes I have learnt are my favourite menus. Before I joined the course
, I rarely did cooking because I did it badly. However
, after I took the classes, I found that I could make it better and it encouraged me to cook by myself. Currently, I always prepare breakfast and dinner.
Last
but not least, I noticed that right now you provide only two courses which are modern Thai foods and a cookery course
for beginner
. I think it would be better if your school could offer more cookery Fix the agreement mistake
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course
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courses
such
as local Thai foods for foreigners, Japanese dishes, fusion foods, etc. I believe that many people would like to learn from your school.
Sincerely,
Jenny ChanSubmitted by kanokwann.joy on
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