You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, ⦁ describe what you enjoyed about the course ⦁ say how much cooking you've done since the course ⦁ suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

Dear Sir or Madam, I, Jenny Chan, have just finished a 14-day cookery

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from Dusit College. I am writing to give you

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about

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course

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of all, I would like to inform you what I liked about

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. The

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were very nice and friendly. I enjoyed the way they gave me the recipe

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dishes.

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, all dishes I have learnt are my favourite menus. Before I joined the

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, I rarely did cooking because I did it badly.

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, after I took the classes, I found that I could make it better and it encouraged me to cook by myself. Currently, I always prepare breakfast and dinner.

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but not least, I noticed that right now you provide only two courses which are modern Thai foods and a cookery

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. I think it would be better if your school could offer more cookery

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as local Thai foods for foreigners, Japanese dishes, fusion foods, etc. I believe that many people would like to learn from your school. Sincerely, Jenny Chan