You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, ⦁ describe what you enjoyed about the course ⦁ say how much cooking you've done since the course ⦁ suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

Dear Sir or Madam, I, Jenny Chan, have just finished a 14-day cookery
course
for
beginner
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from Dusit College. I am writing to give you
feedbacks
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feedback
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about
this
course
.
First
of all, I would like to inform you what I liked about
this
course
. The
insturctors
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instructors
were very nice and friendly. I enjoyed the way they gave me the recipe
of
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dishes.
Moreover
, all dishes I have learnt are my favourite menus. Before I joined the
course
, I rarely did cooking because I did it badly.
However
, after I took the classes, I found that I could make it better and it encouraged me to cook by myself. Currently, I always prepare breakfast and dinner.
Last
but not least, I noticed that right now you provide only two courses which are modern Thai foods and a cookery
course
for
beginner
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. I think it would be better if your school could offer more cookery
course
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such
as local Thai foods for foreigners, Japanese dishes, fusion foods, etc. I believe that many people would like to learn from your school. Sincerely, Jenny Chan
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