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Topic: Nowadays, more people would rather purchase food than cook at home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

Many people today opt for buying their meals
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 of cooking themselves. There are many reasons for
such
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 trends like their busy schedules, easy access to a variety of cuisines and
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 deliveries. On one side it has made life easier while
on the other hand
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 it is accompanied by various health issues as well. The merits and demerits of purchasing
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 online will be discussed in the below paragraphs respectively. To start with, the main advantage of buying
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 is that it saves time. Today it has become easy to purchase foods while sitting at
home
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 through online
food
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 applications which provides great discount offers and fast deliveries.
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, after a long hectic day in the office, people prefer to order online.
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, in today's world due to studies and professional commitment, most of the youngsters are living on their own and neither do they get time for cooking nor, they are interested and eventually, they end up buying meals or going out at restaurants to eat. The
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 market has become immensely popular these days due to the availability of various cuisines like one can have their favourite Chinese
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 in their
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 country. Surely, it has not just saved time but has
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 brought different cultures together.
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, it has a major disadvantage as well, particularly on the health of the society. Most of the outside cooked
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 are not healthy like they are more oily as compared to
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food
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; they are spicy; they are not fresh. These
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 cause various medical issues like obesity and heart problems.
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, having junk
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 on daily basis can make a person obese and that can
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 lead to depression.
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, the public wastes enormous money on these
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items
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 as these are costly. To conclude, street foods or eating at restaurants have both advantages and disadvantages.
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, one needs to be cautious of the addiction of eating outside meals. A balance of
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-cooked
food
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 and ready to eat
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 can help people lead a healthy and happy life equally.

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