Some people think that children should obey rules or do what their parents and teachers want them to do, but others think that children controlled too much cannot deal with problems well by themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Parenting and guiding
children
for their better future are quite complex tasks and people have different opinions on parenting styles. Some opine that
children
should always obey the
rules
imposed by the
parents
and should follow
teachers
’ instructions.
On the contrary
, another group of thought says that
children
should be given some freedom and too much stringency from
parents
and
teachers
could actually ruin their
life
.
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both viewpoints and
finally
express my own opinion. On one hand,
parents
and
teachers
usually set some
rules
for the
children
and they expect the
children
to follow these
rules
. In most
of
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the
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cases,
parents
and
teachers
set
rules
that are helpful and beneficial for the
children
.
For instance
, I can recall that my mother always expected us to wash our hands before eating any food. Sometimes we felt quite bored
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this
instruction.
However
, we now know that it was quite a good habit that our mother instilled in us.
Similarly
, there are many other
rules
that our
parents
wanted us to obey only because they were good
rules
and we, as
children
, had little idea about the negative consequences of disobeying them. Another example is the
time
when I wanted to watch cartoons on TV in the evening but my
parents
wanted me to go out and play some sorts of sports with other kids. At that
time
it was quite an abhorrent activity for me but now I can realise how
this
rule has actually helped me to have
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sound health.
Thus
not all
rules
set by
parents
and
teachers
are meant to dominate the
children
but to actually help them grow properly.
On the contrary
, it is quite hard to believe but actually true that many
parents
ruin their
children
’s
life
by being overprotective and being abusive. If a father beat a
child
for silly reasons and a mother constantly follows and investigates what her teenage
child
is doing, that will surely have a negative consequence.
Children
who are always pressurised by
rules
and regulations
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their family members often end up being timid and hesitant. They lack many important characteristics in their adult
life
and psychologists often attribute criminal activities due to abusing
parents
and
teachers
in childhood.
Furthermore
, if some
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of freedom are not given to the
children
they often cannot expose their true potential in
life
. Again, severe punishment from
parents
and
teachers
can harm
children
’s ingenuity and can turn them into
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immoral
person
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. Considering both of the views I personally think that parenting is a complex task and it determines the future of a
child
.
Thus
parents
and
teachers
should not be too much rigid about
rules
and regulations as it would diminish
children
’s creativity, respect and potential.
On the other hand
, some beneficial
rules
should be there as
children
often fail to understand the importance of discipline,
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of
time
and hygiene. Wise
parents
and
teachers
know the type of
rules
they should impose
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the
children
and what they should be flexible about.
Teachers
and
parents
should be friendly to a
child
in
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most of the
time
and in some cases should be strict for the betterment of the
child
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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