unemployment is the one of the biggest problems of contemporary society. What do you think are the main causes of unemployment? what solutions can be suggest?

Increasing the problem of
redundency
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redundancy
is a major concern in today's era,
as a result
, countless
multitutes
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multitudes
face many troubles from
this
situation. There
are
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number
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of reasons behind
this
issue but
this
has
also
some potential measures which should be taken to tackle
this
massive issue.
This
essay will discuss both
causes
and
solutions
in the subsequent paragraphs. To commence with,
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overpopulation
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over
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population
is the basic and significant
causes
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for
an
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unemployment. To
ellaborate
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elaborate
collaborate
with, day-to-day the
population
ratio increases tremendously to around the world,
thus
, lack of job opportunities roaming among the present society. Another main
causes
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is
that
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lack of
education
and learning
skills
,
this
can be created
redundency
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redundancy
. Many people do not have any special
skills
except
education
,
thus
, they face many
struggle
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to
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a job due to many larger companies are expected the candidates will have more
skills
.
For example
, India faces more unemployment trouble in
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present
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day even their folks have a good academic
education
but they do not have many more
skills
. These are the main reasons for
this
trend. There are some potential measures
can
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be tackled
this
problem. One of the possible remedies is that the authorities should be implemented a new law about reducing the
population
such
as
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baby policy like
as
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China.
For instance
, China has already started
this
policy, their folks accept to adhere
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law,
consequently
, they can be alleviated
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rate. Another possible solution is that the ruling party has to arrange free
course
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courses
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about learning new
skills
and they should be conducted free
internship
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internships
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. These are the manageable
solutions
to reducing
this
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troubles
immediatedly
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immediately
. To conclude, the populace increases tremendously day-to-day to around the world than ever before and
this
is a major headache in
this
modern's era.
This
essay discussed two main
causes
is that
over
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overpopulation
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population
and lack of
education
and
skills
are the reasons for
redundency
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redundancy
.
This
essay suggested two main
solutions
is
that
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the
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one-child baby law and conducting
the
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apply
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free courses and internships are the
solutions
for
this
issue. I hope
this
process is conducive to building a
healthhy
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healthy
society.
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