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In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience to support your arguments

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In the present
days
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students
 have an option to go to other countries for higher studies,
wherein
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where in
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the
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in the
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 past they had to
study
 in their native
country
 for higher
education
. Studying abroad have both merits and demerits.
This
 essay will
further
 discuss both
the
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apply
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perspectives.
Firstly
, for the
students
 who go for studies from developing
country
 to a developed
country
 gets a quality
education
 which he/she is unable to get in own
country
.
For instance
, a friend of mine who wanted to
study
 Culinary Arts decided to go to Malaysia. He applied to the university there and got a nod on an application. He got the degree from there and had an opportunity to
study
in
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on
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 a campus with
world class
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world-class
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 facilities. He
also
get
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 the chance to learn from Michelin star chefs.
Secondly
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,Secondly
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 for a student living in a developing
country
, a degree from a good university
of
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in
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 a developed
country
 opens doors for more job opportunities in and outside the
country
. On contrary,
migration
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the migration
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 of
students
in
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to
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the
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a
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 foreign land
have
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has
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 some pitfalls
also
. One of the main
drawback
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drawbacks
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 is Brain Drain. People who
got
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go
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 out to
foreign
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a foreign
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country
 for higher
education
 tends to settle there for brighter prospects and the nation will lose intelligent minds.
For example
, one of my friends who went to the US to
study
 Neuroscience settled there as she got a better job with more benefits.
Thus
 the nation missed out on a good doctor. To conclude studying abroad has both advantages and disadvantages. But in my opinion,
advantages
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the advantages
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 over-weighs
its
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their
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 disadvantages. Going abroad for higher studies will enable
students
 to acquire quality
education
 which in turn will give them
brighter
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a brighter
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 future.
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Globalization
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Academic mobility
  • Cross-cultural
  • Language proficiency
  • Internationalization of education
  • Diaspora
  • Expat community
  • Pedagogic methodologies
  • Cultural literacy
  • Foreign academic credentials
  • Educational disparity
  • Repatriation
  • Xenophobia
  • Ethnocentric perspectives
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