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Many people believe online learning has unlocked students’ hidden abilities. Others argue that it only holds true for a privileged few, especially in developing countries. Which opinion do you support? In about 300 words, present your arguments.

#people #students’ #abilities #countries #support #arguments
There is no doubt that these days
people
 have different opinions regarding the significance of
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. From my point of view, I believe that online education
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 students to think out of the box and present their abilities. In
this
 essay, I am going to demonstrate the topic from both viewpoints. On one side of the arguments, there are
people
 who argue that digital learning has a positive effect on the ability of
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learners. The main reason for believing
this
 is having
online
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 option will be
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easier and flexible for
person
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 to look for information and explanation for his/her topic. Another explanation is that digital websites is providing different practices and lessons in order to improve
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people
 abilities. They can
also
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 videos to help them understand more any issues they face.
On the other hand
, it is possible to consider it with the opposing case. It is argued that in fact students who improve their skills and behavers through using the internet and digital tools to learn, are few and lucky individuals. Because
people
 will depend more on digital searches in their works and assignments, which will
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 their performance to think and come with new ideas by themselves. As we have seen, there are no easy answers to
this
 question. On balance, I tend to think that using online technologies and modern tools not only will aid learners but
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will
also
 help teachers. It will facilitate various teaching methods.
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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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