Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers , whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both views and give your opinion .

Some people are of the opinion that

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should not give assignments

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, some others are opposed to

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idea, claiming that

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should do homework by

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as it has an effect on their academic performance. While the former view can be justified for some reason, I am more inclined towards the latter. I can understand

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why

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people believe that giving tasks when

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stayed at home is not essential.

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is because it can seem a mental pressure, which they always worried

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must to

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,

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would be released some punishments for those who haven’t submitted tasks on the latter lesson,

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to a lowering practice quality due to only dealing with

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to avoid some penalties. Another reason is that

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assigments

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assignments

will make up the majority of their time at home, which they can spend to enjoy outside or inside activities or do relevant housework. If

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mainly focus on studying, they can lack

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soft skills relating to their daily

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experiences

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as interaction with others, independence when they live apart from their family.

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is form

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some unpredicted outcomes, maybe is not enough physical health or rely on friends living together.

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, there are several arguments why I support the statement that doing homework will bring several

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for education progress.

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of all,

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should frequently practice after every lesson, which helps them

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for entire knowledge or cover something that they are not catch up lectures of

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a teacher

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at the class as nothing all

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have a talented to understand whenever. Vietnam, where the majority of youngsters have a large

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of exercises to remember in long-term period and positively use them in high levels of education, can be seen as an object lesson. The

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reason is that

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homework help pupils provoke their thinking or develop logical skill, especially some difficult objects as math, chemistry or science.

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why a lot of young people these days become

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success in their career path, caused by they prepare several crucial skills when they were undergraduate. To sum up, my firm conviction is that the compelling overweigh the pitfall of giving tasks

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helps

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revise and gain more knowledge as well as hone several

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skills.