Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extend do you agree?

Dear Ralph,  Thank you for your email. I was glad to hear from you again. I’m sorry for not writing sooner but I have been snowed under with my homework. в 2022 уже необязательно оправдываться за то, что не писал.  In your
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you asked me about shopping. Personally, I bought
clothes
once a month for every season. As for me, my
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shop is a shein because I really like to buy
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and shoes online. It's convenient for me and I don't waste my time on the road. In my opinion, teenagers should not only buy fashionable
clothes
because I believe that you have to wear what you really like, feel comfortable and be on firm ground. By the way, I'd like to ask you about your visit to the new shopping mall. What kind of
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do you want to buy? What shopping mall are you going to visit?
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whom are you going to the shopping mall? That’s all for now. Keep in touch. With love, Alyona
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • erosion
  • face-to-face
  • interactions
  • privacy concerns
  • data breaches
  • misinformation
  • polarize
  • cyberbullying
  • online harassment
  • procrastination
  • productivity
  • social isolation
  • dissemination
  • breeding ground
  • vast amounts
  • personal information
  • mental health
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