In the past, people used their free time more better as compared to nowadays. To what extent do you agree or not?

On 31 October, I watched a
movie
with my friends at Central Festival Eastville. The
movie
is called dune. Dune is the story of Paul Atreides, a brilliant and gifted young man born into a great destiny beyond his understanding, who must travel to the most dangerous planet in the universe to ensure the future of his family and his people. I decided to watch
this
show because of many reasons.
First
of all, the trailer, I found it interesting when I
first
saw it.
Secondly
, It is the type of
movie
that I like, Sci-Fi and adventure, After I finished watching it, I knew that
this
is the best Sci-Fi motion picture that I’ve ever watched. I have learned a lot from the film, I’ve improved my listening skill from a conversation in the film, They used many interesting idioms.
In addition
, the film has some scenes in which a character spoke another language with a subtitle in English, which help my reading skill too.
Lastly
, I had the experience of watching a
movie
in the cinema during a pandemic situation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • streaming movies
  • browsing social media
  • playing video games
  • digital entertainment
  • active pursuits
  • resurgence of interest
  • fitness trends
  • outdoor adventures
  • group sports
  • perception of time
  • connectivity requirements
  • passive activities
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