Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you cannot go anymore Say who can go instead of you Say why this person is a good person to go with

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Dear Tom, I hope

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letter finds you well. I am writing

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letter to tell you about some changes in our plans for watching ‘No time to die’ together that we have arranged a few days ago. I am incredibly sorry for being unable to watch the movie with you

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weekend. I have been requested to travel to Singapore for a work function for 15 days, and I will leave Melbourne

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Friday. As you know I am a huge fan of James Bond, and you can imagine how devastated I am. As I am aware Amy, our ex-colleague, is extremely into the 007 movies--series as well. She has

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told me that she would desperately love to watch the new movie, but she couldn’t purchase a ticket due to the high demand. I have contacted her, and she is excited to watch the movie with you

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of me. I am pretty sure Amy is a wonderful mate to watch

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film with you as she has watched

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series at least twice.

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, when you will have any confusion due to the storyline being related to the previous films’ plots, she can explain those to you without any effort. Please tell me your thoughts at the earliest opportunity. I am waiting for your reply. Best wishes, Nina

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

221 words

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