Write a letter to a book store manager who is living in another city. Ask him/her to make available a book that you are interested in. In your letter, you should tell: – What book you are looking for? – Why you need this book? – How you plan to purchase the book?

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Dear Sir/Madam I am writing

this

letter to ask you if you could arrange a very rare

book

for me. I have been looking for a

book

called The Art of Currency Trading by Brent Donnelly. I had inquired about

this

book

in a few offline bookstores but I ran out of my luck,

unfortunately

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I could not find the

book

also

, I looked for it in online stores as well. Let me explain you to why I need to purchase

this

book

. Currently, I am learning forex trading which is a part of currancy's and stocks trading. Since

this

manual is in the market, many traders make tons of profit by just using the content of the

book

. Based on

this

I should buy

this

volume as early as possible. I have been reading some reviews about it, and immediately I found

this

publication. So I am asking you to make available

this

edition for me.

Also

, I would love to pay in advance with my credit card. I look forward to receiving your reply. Yours faithfully Biren Patel

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coherence cohesion

Ensure each paragraph is focused on a single idea without deviating into unrelated information.

coherence cohesion

Maintain a logical flow between paragraphs, use a range of cohesive devices to achieve this.

task achievement

Address all parts of the task clearly, including the requested book, the reason for your interest, and how you wish to purchase it.

task achievement

Maintain a suitably formal tone throughout the letter, and avoid informal language or contractions.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

180 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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