Write a letter to a book store manager who is living in another city. Ask him/her to make available a book that you are interested in. In your letter, you should tell: – What book you are looking for? – Why you need this book? – How you plan to purchase the book?
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing
this
letter to ask you if you could arrange a very rare book
for me.
I have been looking for a book
called The Art of Currency Trading by Brent Donnelly. I had inquired about this
book
in a few offline bookstores but I ran out of my luck, unfortunately
I could not find the Add a comma
unfortunately,
book
also
, I looked for it in online stores as well.
Let me explain you to why I need to purchase this
book
. Currently, I am learning forex trading which is a part of currancy's and stocks trading. Since this
manual is in the market, many traders make tons of profit by just using the content of the book
. Based on this
I should buy this
volume as early as possible.
I have been reading some reviews about it, and immediately I found this
publication. So I am asking you to make available this
edition for me. Also
, I would love to pay in advance with my credit card.
I look forward to receiving your reply.
Yours faithfully
Biren PatelSubmitted by birenp046 on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph is focused on a single idea without deviating into unrelated information.
coherence cohesion
Maintain a logical flow between paragraphs, use a range of cohesive devices to achieve this.
task achievement
Address all parts of the task clearly, including the requested book, the reason for your interest, and how you wish to purchase it.
task achievement
Maintain a suitably formal tone throughout the letter, and avoid informal language or contractions.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite