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Greeting, it is my great pleasure to write to you about my interest in the
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position on environmental analysis with
focus
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on sociohydrology at Uppsala
University
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. Due to the globally increasing importance of hydraulic
structure
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studies, especially in non-developed countries including Iran, the hydraulic
structure
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was chosen by me for B.
Sc
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. and M.
Sc
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. degrees. My studies about hydraulic
structure
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were started at the Shahid Chamran
University
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of Ahvaz, the
University
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has been considered as the hydraulic scientific
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of Iran, after acceptance in the
University
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academic entrance examination 2012. During my B.
Sc
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. degree in
water
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engineering, I passed various courses as fluid mechanics hydraulics,
hydrology
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, and
water
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conveyance
structure
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, hydraulics of flood and design of irrigation systems. After completing my B.
Sc
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., I engaged in an M.
Sc
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. in
water
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conveyance
structure
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at Tehran
University
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, the most important
University
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of Iran. During the M.
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. degree, I
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improved my
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and increased my abilities for using specific scientific software.
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, Flow3D,
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Gems, and GIS. After successfully passing the theoretical courses, my thesis study, The Study of Simple Throat less Flume, was started under the supervision of Professor Alireza Vatankhah. As soon as I graduated from Tehran
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, I sought job opportunities and managed to get an occupation at school, where I held different responsibilities for nine months. After that, I got a position in a company (Forouzandeh Construction) which was related to my major at
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to gain experience and become familiar with others’ ideas;
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, I carved for putting my ideas into practice and did not want to confine myself to the theoretical
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which I had attained at
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. I was able to improve my digital
knowledge
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and skills including AUTOCAD, HECRAC, SPSS, Python, and Open foam. I have selected Uppsala
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as it is among the most notable
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for its instructional and academic reputations, curriculum, and
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backgrounds. Provided that I succeed in being admitted for the
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position in that
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, I can live to the most immediate educational priority in my academic career. I am well informed that the
university
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’s
water
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science and
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programs are in line with my career-related desires and the professional goals I have set in my life. In my view, doing
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program and application of
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in society will be a turning point
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provides me with an opportunity to augment my educational capabilities and experiences, broaden my awareness, and
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my financial status. I am closely familiar with the flood
structure
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and the resulting damages. I have gained field experience and carried out objective observations;
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problem in our country every year. I have the ambition to
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issue and to find solutions;
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engineering. As an ambitious and diligent student, I am keen on learning new things, especially when it comes to sub-fields of my major, explicitly flood, and their applications. I am well aware of, interested in, and have a rich background of the sort of projects run by your
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team;
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project and participate in the planned simulations and design processes. What’s more, a good command of laboratory science and practices, together with
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of software programs, is an asset that has aided me during my career and
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.
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candidate in your
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group, explore the educational goals I crave, and hone my skills to be applied to the field.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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