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nrup shah

Nov 10, 2021

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

interpersonal relationships
social media
long-distance relationships
superficial connections
online dating
communication technology
geographical barriers
cultural exchange
emotional depth
facetime
digital communication
virtual interactions
miscommunication
social isolation
networking

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