Nowadays many people interact with each other and have changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the type of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, technology is
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important role in
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connected to each other. some
people
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that technology is
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away from each other and
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think that it is
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very easy to person
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This
essay evaluates both facts with plausible reasons that will be delineated in the following paragraphs.
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with, in the
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world
people
are habitual with the
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and mobile phone. it is very
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impact

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of the
person
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relation with each other,
Internet
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is very important role play to stay
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people
to the closer once because they spend most of the time on the social media and other activity on
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like
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post daily
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content and
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teenagers
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this
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time in it and get poor results on
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, Modern technology is very
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to stay
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with each other within a
second
to anywhere in the world and
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or
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very easily. Durning covid pandemic labour
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are
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stoped and many
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are doing there
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online for using
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application
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meeting or online lectures or
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more online
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are
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helpful to doing
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task
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. To conclude, In the developing world some online
activites
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are very
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on
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teenagers and it is very harmful to
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career but some of the online
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are very useful to gain
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knowledge and doing
work
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from anywhere
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