More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation. Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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private vehicles become more popular with any dwellers following the augmentation of transportation.The majority of

people

are depending on

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cars

as their

first

most means of

transport

.

Therefore

, it's crucial for us to evaluate the side effects as well as set out some possible solutions to get through

this

issue. On one hand,it is irrefutable that private

transport

is the most convenient way of travelling.

Also

,

people

who cannot afford

cars

try their utmost effort to buy and get independent.

This

way they can travel on their own time and within their comfort zone.

however

, being confined to private

cars

can cause

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of health issues especially when

people

are too much dependent .

For example

, research shows from The University of California that,

people

have started avoiding simple walks

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is one of the major

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of obesity and long term chronic problems.

Secondly

,

cars

are the foremost source of environmental pollution throughout the world. According to Cop 26 conference held in Glasgow

this

year, the world can lead to massive disasters if we are not able to control

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of gasses and toxic substances from vehicles.

Nevertheless

, there is always a solution to every problem,

people

should use public

transport

to avoid pollution and Overcrowding on motorways. Government should improve

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local

transport

system by investing .

last

but not least, residents of local areas choose to walk more often for small chores

as a result

, there will be a massive difference in overall health at the individual level as well as

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environment. To conclude,private

cars

have a great influence on society.

Therefore

, an increasing number of

people

are fascinated by having their personal

cars

.whereas, transforming public

transport

and making it more approachable could be one of the solutions to

this

problem.