It is noticeable that globalization makes the trend of immigration
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increased, and moving to another
country
is less difficult to keep up in terms of lifestyle and culture.
While
some people argue that these
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undertakings, others believe prefer to adapt to the new environment.
This
essay will discuss both these points of view.
To begin
with, those who disagree that the people decide to keep their own customs. Since
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they have their national identity, they strongly
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preserving their citizenship. As an illustration, some countries have simplified the process of permanent residence for immigrants. In Peru, people become naturalized citizens by living in the nation for two years
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and paying about $25.000.
However
, some immigrants prefer to retain citizenship. It might be
also
that, they have difficulty accepting the local attitude and behaviour,
due to
some things are not
according to
the norms that they believe in.
On the contrary
, focusing on one’s preferences, one of the best ways to respect the new
country
where we settle is
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the culture day.
For instance
, some
country
celebrates Thanksgiving. It has historical roots in religious and cultural traditions, the blessing of the harvest and of the preceding year.
Moreover
, following the new customs
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avoids misunderstanding in communications, learn new things , and get familiar with the social culture. When
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with an American, we should see directly into his eyes , and once visited a relative
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there, as a custom in their
country
bringing a small gift.
In conclusion, in my point of view, it is understandable that following the new
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customs and traditions
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foreigners to socialize , and faster adaptation inside the local population,
as well as
preserve our national identity.