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In many countries today, the eating habits and lifestyles of children are different from those of the previous generations. Some people say this has had a negative effect on their health. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Now a days
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 pupils have
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 schedule because of their studies which
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 their eating manner. Many masses claim that it has dire consequences on their immunity. I firmly endorse
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the notion
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 will shed light on my opinion on the former and lead to a logical conclusion. Analysing the statement and explaining
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 of all, youngsters in past times had a healthy diet and seldomly they had junk food which made their life healthier and
disease free
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 whereas on
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 side today's generation is more diverted towards fast food and have unhealthy diet in their daily routine which leads to a plethora of medical issues. Make it more clear,
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, a survey which was monitored by health agency in 2018, found that people had a fit lifestyle in previous time comparatively from
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 time. Probing ahead, In old
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 children spent their myriad of time not only in playing but
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 perform some physical activity which aids them to have a
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 life. On other hand in
this
 modern globalization children are more engaged in electronic gadgets which not only affect their eyesight but
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 multiply the health risk.
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 ,the vicious radiation produced by electric devices directly impact
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their brain and heart. To infer, I believe that young generation in past years led a happy and healthy life in comparison with today's date because they prefer homemade food rather than eating outside.
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