The influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

As we know, the effect of human beings on the earth's ecosystem is
undenyable
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undeniable
which leads to the extinction of flora and
funa
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fauna
and biodiversity.The most important destructive reasons are
defrostation
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deforestation
and global warming.
First
of all, we destroy jungles and
vegetations
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for agricultural or
constructural
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structural
reasons. By increasing the population of the cities and
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towns
two
people need more space to build their house or to cultivate their crops. Due to
this
reason, they remove trees by which lots of animals or insects
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their habitat and gradually they will
die-out
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die out
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.
For example
, in Sumatra people destroyed a vast part of their forest to construct buildings after a while they found that the number of
Sumatrian
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Sumatran
tigers decreased dramatically, and now there are just 400
Sumatrian
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Sumatran
tigers are alive. The other important factor that hurt the environment
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a lot
is global warming. Every year our planet
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warmer and warmer because of fossil fuels that we use or the huge amount of carbon dioxide that we release
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the atmosphere which leads to the destruction of ozone
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layer
in long run. If the ozone layer
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, there will be no species on the earth which means no life even for human beings. To tackle
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we have to raise public awareness by informing them about the consequences of destroying nature and not paying attention to it. The other solution is cultivating trees to replace the
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that we cut years before to be able to compensate
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damage. In conclusion, as
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reiterated
before every single flower, tree, or animal in
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nature has
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crusial
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crucial
role that must be
consereved
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conserved
carefully.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • habitat destruction
  • deforestation
  • urbanization
  • overexploitation
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • invasive species
  • conservation
  • sustainable practices
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • ecosystems
  • species population
  • genetic diversity
  • environmental awareness
  • protected areas
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