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Some people think the best way to solve traffic congestion in cities is to provide free public transport 24 hours a day, 7 days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is generally believed that if the
government
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 wants to solve the traffic congestion problem, the most effective solution is to provide free public
transportation
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,
such
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 as
buses
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 and trains. In my opinion, I agree with
this
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 idea because it really helps to ease the situation.
Firstly
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, I believe that free public
transportation
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 can reduce
people
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's dependence on cars and improve traffic congestion.
People
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 who live outside the city centre tend to go to work because there are no
buses
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 and train stations around the area.
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, the
government
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 should consider building railway and bus lanes to cover all remote areas.
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, dedicated lanes can be allocated to
buses
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 to avoid traffic jams.
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, Japan has done a very good job with its advanced subway system. Their stations are always overcrowded, and trains and
buses
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 are always on time.
People
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 rarely own cars and they rely on public
transportation
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.
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, the
government
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 should always carry out publicity activities to promote the advantages of using free public
transportation
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. By doing so,
people
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 can break the mentality that public
transportation
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 is dirty, slow, and unreliable. As long as more
people
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 know, the
transportation
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 system is well designed, more comfortable and more convenient;
people
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 will soon start using public
transportation
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.
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, Singapore has implemented 24/7 free public
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, and its roads are unobstructed. In short, I firmly believe that free
transportation
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 will reduce congestion by promoting awareness-raising campaigns and investment in
buses
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 and trains.
Although
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 it is a difficult task for the
government
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 to implement free public
transportation
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 in the community, once the
government
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 implements it successfully, it will have a major impact on everyone's life.

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