You wanted to start your own business. Write a letter to a friend Tell him/her about your business Explain why you think it is a good idea Ask him/her help for some help or advice
Dear Mark,
I hope you're doing fine. I'm writing to inform you about the trade I'm about to commence in March. It's a fantastic business that you can benefit from, trust me.
It is a clothing venture that will cater to both adults and children. The required startup capital is not so expensive and I've seen a designer who would supply these clothes at good prices
Since there is no store within my neighbourhood in
this
field, I thought it'll be a great idea to open a store and stock both formal and informal clothes for people. Also
, I think I would see good patronage because most people have to drive almost one hour to the main mall and do their shopping.
Furthermore
, I would like to request your advice on the accounting and staffing of my new company if possible. I have some challenges on how to reconcile my accounts, draw out staff packages and their benefits.
I look forward to hearing from you soon so that I can also
run my business successfully like yours.
Best Regards,
SophieSubmitted by Kemi111 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite