The education you receive from your family is more important than the education you receive from school. To what extent do you agree with this statement and why?

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powerful source of information for

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lifestyle as it teaches everything for happy modern life. The sources of

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as the Internet and older family members are

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to school teaching.

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, most people are of the opinion that the knowledge from family is more valuable in comparison to that of from

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. To some

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point of view and in

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I will explain my opinion with supporting examples. In the

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-place

education

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from

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is very much informative and deep. To be more precise, the concepts delivered from teachers are in order and explanatory, as they know how to teach and what to teach their students.

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first year

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scholar

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will be taught basic math

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, not

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. A serious structure in

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system is well proven by years.

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,

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have not only 5 subjects to learn, but

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a lot of units related to the outside world and how to practice that knowledge with a lot of range of activities by getting certified.

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, of

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exposure, youngsters will get to know what to do

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circumstances.

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, due to my school

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a champion of table tennis amongst the country as

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trainer, I have learned how to play it on the professional level, and

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skill helped me in my work area, where management got to know me by evening table tennis games. On the other side of the argument,

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from

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very strict, where discipline and experience above all. If members of the family have some skills, which are not found anywhere,

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helps

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children to get excelled. A good illustration of

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poetry, art and agriculture, where transferring skills and secret family knowledge from elders to minors are essential.

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,

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does not

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young’s need to not lag in the modern world, where science and information technologies are key players everywhere. To sum up, even though some might argue with me saying they can teach values, traditions from family

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, I would disagree believing it is totally inaccurate to

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only one source of information. Modern

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provide well-structured different concepts by using new technologies and great

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. I think that a mix of teaching from family and school is the best to balance current problems, but the

schools

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anyway overweigh family teaching as they provide a wide range of academic exposure.