In their advertising business nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
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, advertising is one of the most essential factors in parts of daily people’s Change the determiner
This day
These days
live
. If Replace the word
lives
question
that many advertising of Add an article
the question
a question
business
usually emphasize
of new their Change the verb form
emphasizes
products
in some way is addressed, it will be challenging for us to reach our decision of this
statement. The following essay will analyze the reason to support agreement
.
Some Correct article usage
the agreement
business
pays attention with
Change preposition
to
advertising
of new Correct article usage
the advertising
their
Correct pronoun usage
apply
products
in many ways. It is a selling strategy of Add an article
the business
business
to convince many Fix the agreement mistake
businesses
customer
to buy their Change to a plural noun
customers
products
. The result of this
strategy can help them have more profits. For example
, cloth
Correct article usage
the cloth
business
makes a new style of dress which is the first
style of dress in the world. They use this
information to reveal many clients via online advertising to emphasize their products
which are new. After 2 months, this
business
get
the profit from buying Change the verb form
gets
this
dress about 12 millions
bath.
Change to singular
million
This
is a positive development of marketing of business
because this
represents that business
has many
creativity for selling their product by using the new thing to convince many Replace the quantifier
much
customer
to buy their Change to a plural noun
customers
products
. There are many ideas in the business
market so, clients have many choices of products
. It is a perfect way to Add a missing verb
be competitive
competitive
in selling. Replace the word
compete
For instance
, many food business
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businesses
have
their idea to make a new menu of Change the verb form
has
noodle
. People can choose some menu that they want to eat.
In conclusion, Some Fix the agreement mistake
noodles
business
pays attention with
advertising of new their Change preposition
to
products
in many ways because it is a selling strategy of business
and it is a positive development of marketing of Add an article
the business
business
to help Add an article
the business
customer
have many choices of Add an article
the customer
products
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