In their advertising business nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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, advertising is one of the most essential factors in parts of daily people’s
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. If
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that many advertising of
business
usually
emphasize
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of new their
products
in some way is addressed, it will be challenging for us to reach our decision of
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statement. The following essay will analyze the reason to support
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. Some
business
pays attention
with
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advertising
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the advertising
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of new
their
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apply
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products
in many ways. It is a selling strategy of
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the business
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business
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businesses
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to convince many
customer
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customers
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to buy their
products
. The result of
this
strategy can help them have more profits.
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,
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business
makes a new style of dress which is the
first
style of dress in the world. They use
this
information to reveal many clients via online advertising to emphasize their
products
which are new. After 2 months,
this
business
get
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the profit from buying
this
dress about 12
millions
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bath.
This
is a positive development of marketing of
business
because
this
represents that
business
has
many
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creativity for selling their product by using the new thing to convince many
customer
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customers
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to buy their
products
. There are many ideas in the
business
market so, clients have many choices of
products
. It is a perfect way to
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be competitive
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competitive
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in selling.
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, many food
business
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businesses
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have
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their idea to make a new menu of
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. People can choose some menu that they want to eat. In conclusion, Some
business
pays attention
with
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advertising of new their
products
in many ways because it is a selling strategy of
business
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the business
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and it is a positive development of marketing of
business
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the business
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to help
customer
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the customer
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have many choices of
products
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • novelty
  • excitement
  • latest trends
  • improvements
  • advancements
  • differentiating
  • competitors
  • innovation
  • progress
  • attracting attention
  • generating curiosity
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