One of your friends has asked you to be a partner in his new business. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Give your opinion of your friend's business idea • Tell him whether or not you have decided to accept the offer • Explain your reasons for this decision
Dear Mark,
I’m writing to you about your proposal to become
partial
owner Add an article
a partial
in
your business. My opinion is as follows:
Your innovative concept is preferred by me as IT is the industry where you can gain huge Change preposition
of
profit
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profits
Therefore
, I salute your competence and knowledge related to this
industry. In addition
to innovation, our country has abundance
of unemployed IT literate youth, who can be recruited in your concern.
About your proposal, I’ll deny Add an article
an abundance
due
to my lack of understanding Correct pronoun usage
it due
in
IT, Change preposition
of
although
my family and children are against my decision. Consequently
, they are still encouraging me to invest in your organization.
However
, my poor understanding could be a critical issue for your organization in the future. Furthermore
, my financial condition is also
not strong, and medical insurance expense is a must for me to continue, thereby paying premium
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a premium
the premium
Besides
investment, I do not want that our personal relationship has any monetary interest in it.
All the best!
Ryan SmithSubmitted by toriqul1976 on
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