One of your friends has asked you to be a partner in his new business. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Give your opinion of your friend's business idea • Tell him whether or not you have decided to accept the offer • Explain your reasons for this decision

Dear Mark, I’m writing to you about your proposal to become
partial
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owner
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your business. My opinion is as follows: Your innovative concept is preferred by me as IT is the industry where you can gain huge
profit
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.
Therefore
, I salute your competence and knowledge related to
this
industry.
In addition
to innovation, our country has
abundance
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of unemployed IT literate youth, who can be recruited in your concern. About your proposal, I’ll deny
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to my lack of understanding
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IT,
although
my family and children are against my decision.
Consequently
, they are still encouraging me to invest in your organization.
However
, my poor understanding could be a critical issue for your organization in the future.
Furthermore
, my financial condition is
also
not strong, and medical insurance expense is a must for me to continue, thereby paying
premium
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Besides
investment, I do not want that our personal relationship has any monetary interest in it. All the best! Ryan Smith
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