Your child's teacher has requested a meeting with you this Friday to discuss your child's low test scores. Unfortunately, you cannot attend. Write a letter to your child's teacher. In your letter • Describe why you cannot attend the meeting • Explain how you have been helping your child study • Propose another time to meet

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Dear

Mr.

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Smith, I am writing to you regarding my youngster’s poor mark in the recent exam. I do apologize for being absent

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the scheduled consultation due to

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at an official meeting at my workplace. My CEO phoned me on

this

particular day to attend a conference, which will discuss the reason for poor sales performance in recent months;

otherwise

, he would take disciplinary action against several of my salespersons.

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, I had left with no choice; but to attend the meeting.

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, I am well-aware of my kid’s grade, who sits with me every evening to study when she performs her homework.

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, my plan is to hire a home tutor, who will look after her studies beside me. My schedule is quite open

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Thursday, and I can participate in the required consultation

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if you have no other appointments on that day. I am awaiting your response. Sincerely yours, Ryan Walker

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