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Your child's teacher has requested a meeting with you this Friday to discuss your child's low test scores. Unfortunately, you cannot attend. Write a letter to your child's teacher. In your letter • Describe why you cannot attend the meeting • Explain how you have been helping your child study • Propose another time to meet

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Dear
Mr.
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 Smith, I am writing to you regarding my youngster’s poor mark in the recent exam. I do apologize for being absent
in
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 the scheduled consultation due to
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 at an official meeting at my workplace. My CEO phoned me on
this
 particular day to attend a conference, which will discuss the reason for poor sales performance in recent months;
otherwise
, he would take disciplinary action against several of my salespersons.
Therefore
, I had left with no choice; but to attend the meeting.
In addition
, I am well-aware of my kid’s grade, who sits with me every evening to study when she performs her homework.
Furthermore
, my plan is to hire a home tutor, who will look after her studies beside me. My schedule is quite open
on
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the
next
 Thursday, and I can participate in the required consultation
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 if you have no other appointments on that day. I am awaiting your response. Sincerely yours, Ryan Walker
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