Many believe that it is important to protect all wild animals, while others think that it is important to protect some, not all of them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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nature

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undomesticated creatures, whilst it is

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by others that it is key to preserve some

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specific

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of the

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will put my own point of

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notion that wild animals should be protected because it brings stability and

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balance

to our nuture. Since for our food chain pollination is an important factor which is done by small insects, As small bees are taking nectar from one flower to

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soaring our crop growth. To cite an example,

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rate by

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way is not as effective as by natural pollination.

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, It brings colour to our life. As visiting

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areas and observe many jungle's habitants give ultimate fun and reducing

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, It is told by many

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that saving some types of

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a wild

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beast

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all.

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is because spending money on protecting them is better to spend on people's health and education. Forasmuch-as,

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million dollars are

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for safeguarding the animals and on

preservation

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the preservation

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of their habitats.

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Furthermore

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necessities

. To illustrate, World wildlife protection spent 30 million Euros on protecting African elephants in 2020.

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, many wild beasts

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to

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human

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and can put a man

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in danger and in some

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it causes

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their death. To sum up, Wild livestock should be protected because it is the main factor for our diet growth rate and one of the best

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of entertainment to see.

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, Yearly massive

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is being put for harbouring and

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shielding

of these creatures.

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opinion

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we

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protect wildlife animals because it makes

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nature attractive and

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a source of

relaxing

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as visiting the Zoo and seeing them in the cages.