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Some people think that money is the best gift to give to young people, while others think other types of gifts are better for young people. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In our world, money
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 an important role, and we use it dealy for any kind of need.
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, some think
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 the best present you can give to a child or teen, though others say the best gifts are different kinds. In
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 the disadvantages of both views.
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, on the one
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 we have
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 that like to give money to young
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, and thinks is a good thing for them.
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 is because maybe their families can afford to do that, and so they can start to see the value of it and how important it is to make sure to spend their cash wisely.
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 it can't be always easy, probably many of them would take the advantage to have more and spend it on things they don't really need for their life and up broken all the time, and perhaps
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 when they become adults.
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 why some choose to give them different types of presents. On the other ,hand we have those that like to give them more informative or constructive gifts.
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 as books or toys where they have to work with their hands and build something making the use of their brains.
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, kids where they have been given those gifts at
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 early age where they can knowledge themselves, and keep learning from them most of the time,
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may end up having more success in their lives. Though is not always ideal to give them to many as well as they could get addicted
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 having toys and some families would keep spoiling them. In conclusion,
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 think that giving their children cash as a gift
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 of other material
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is better. In my opinion, is good to give young
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 a gift,
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 many or a toy.
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, we should always think about how it could benefit them before we do it.

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