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the University Hospital in Kingston as it was in 1990 and again in 2020.

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The maps display the University Hospital in Kingston as it was in 1990 and again in 2020. Overall, Nessan’s
Road
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 runs from east to west at the bottom, and the hospital is situated above
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. By 2020, the main change is that the farmland had been replaced with infrastructure for the hospital. The farmland that stood in the northeast of the map had been replaced by a new hospital building used for inpatients, and the area of farmland in the east was being used as additional parking spaces in 2020. The original hospital building in the northwest of the map was being used exclusively for treating outpatients in 2020. At the west end of Nessan’s
Road
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, a new
entrance
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 had been added specifically for ambulances with a
road
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 leading to the outpatient building. To the east, the old
entrance
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 became the public
entrance
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, and that
road
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 to the hospital had two roundabouts built on it; the
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 giving access to the parking area and the
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 for accessing a new
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 that extends to the east.
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 new
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 ends at a
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 roundabout for entering the inpatient building or the northern
entrance
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 to the parking facility.

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