The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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illustrate

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given

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the wave-energy

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machine

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machine's

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possible allocation, specification and the

menthod

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method

of energy generation.

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AIR

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circulation in chambers is the

machanisum

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mechanism

produces

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the

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apply

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electricity

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Machine

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location is the driver of the

electricity

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output

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, and it's one of the

factor

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of the

set up

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cost as well. Wave go into chambers along the path on

bottom

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and

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air flow

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airflow

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come

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from the top side of

machince

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machine

machines

casue

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cause

the water levels rise and

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air flow

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airflow

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upward,

then

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air

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were

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cuirculating

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circulating

in chambers to move the turbine spin, as it's connected

electricity

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generator,

therefore

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the turbine movement could generate the

electricity

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. Waves

output

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depends on

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machine

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the machine

a machine

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placed

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place

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. Small waves when machiner near to

land

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then

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output

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lower, when it's in

placed

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place

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far away from

land

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output

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higher

due to

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the wares is lager. Installation cost is higher when it's not

clsoe

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land

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oppositly

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oppositely

opposite

cheaper installation cost when

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machine

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the machine

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nearly to

land

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words machine, air, electricity, output, land with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "wave" was used 3 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
5
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

154 words

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