You have just finished your master’s degree and need to leave your current part-time job to search for full-time employment. Write a letter to your current employer. In your letter ● explain why you will not pursue a full-time job in his/her company ● say why you’ve enjoyed working for him/her ● tell him/her how much longer you will continue to work for him/her

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Dear David, I am writing to inform you that I will be unable to continue my part-time employment with you any longer as I need a full-time opportunity. I am

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that my current company can not offer a full-time opportunity as the business is a new one, and business growth is not substantial;

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, I have no other option, but to apply for other types of employment. About you, you are one of the best managers during my short career, who has taught me numerous managerial

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that will be really useful for me in my new job search.

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, my time in your company was really vital due to

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guidelines and coaching that you taught. About my current employment, I will be happy to continue my duties up to the

quarter;

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, I will be leaving your company. In the meantime, my duties will be shared with the individual that you select

accordingly

. I am awaiting your response. Sincerely yours, Ryan Smith

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