The internet has caused people to be isolated from their rea lives. Do you agree or disagree?

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Today, new technologies have been creating a situation for individuals to not have a social relationship with other

people

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essay disagrees about

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's solitary social circumstances which are happened by the

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. Wiping out the distance between

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around the world and providing an embed for everyone to have their own jobs are the most important reasons.

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, by rising the

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, especially social networks, the distance between individuals has been gone. In the past,

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used to communicate only with a person who was living in their neighbourhood or town. But, inventing the

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has been game-changing and

people

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can be in touch not only with their neighbours but

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with all persons all around the world.

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, since Facebook has been introduced, more friendship groups that contain

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from different nationally have been made.

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, the

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is an embed for inventing new businesses. Since most

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, especially housewives, do not have enough time to have their own business, the new technology has brought an opportunity for them to have their own jobs

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their regular jobs in society. So, for developing businesses

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have to expand their networks and make new relationships with other members of society.

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, Instagram is a place for influencers to have their own source of money income by creating more social connections. In conclusion, the

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not only is not making

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isolated but

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has been a source of income for a lot of

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and a place that the distance between different nations has been disappeared.

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